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"Dying a second time, she complained not of her husband, for why should she complain of being beloved?"
Ovid

Is she gone? My darling Eurydice
with haste is borne away before my eyes?
Durst I presage the truth and lend my faith
to think the Godless – is this her demise?
No love should e’er tread so crueler roads,
where even paths rebel n’ yield not the way!
Where cold-hearted stones care not and curse love
with all lost on their precipice this day.
I see her not. No subtle shape to tease
the wind about and ease its chill-edg’d mood;
I haven’t her grace, her mein nor her smile -
Bitter breeze you must contemn me, and brood.
But Lo! There is her scent. Those fruity fumes
and flo’ers. Smell her colour! Her texture! There,
like the stray sunbeam gently filt’ring through
the canopy, that kiss’d your eyes, lips, hair…
I should not breathe and thus dare expel her,
What man, beast or god could deny my Love?
My Eurydice… I only stole what
none could resist, and ‘stead saw you stol’n off!
Foul Gods with fouler games! What pow’rs let you
circle your bargains with a tainted rule?
With Hercules’s strength, Atlas’ fortitude
naught would change! What hope for I, Immortals?
Let me steer the sheer ‘byss fairly once more
and I would not falter! I would not fall
or fall behind she would not, but once more
her sweet voice’d be leased at my beck and call…
Chauron! I command you let me ‘gain
board and ‘cross to the further shores and her!
Boatman, heed me, take me ‘cross the Styx!
Refuse me? Curse you callous saboteur!
…alas, she is lost. And without my Muse
no hymn, requiem or song will e’er flow
from my fingers, from my Lute’s silvr’y strings.
No Eurydice, no music – this I know.

In the ruins that succeed this love apart
is a silent lute and a heavy heart,
n‘gether with the flitt’ring spirits, I cry:
‘Why should Orpheus live and she twice die?’
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First of all, its meant to be read aloud.

If you have not read the story of Orpheus and Eurydice, you should. It is the most tragic love story that I know.

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In short, however, when Eurydice dies Orpheus in his grief travels into the Underworld to bring her back, where his music persuades Proserpina and Pluto to let Eurydice leave the Underworld. The condition is, however, that Orpheus was not meant to look behind at her during this journey.

Eurydice, who had died via a snake bite to the leg, was lame and struggled to keep up. The story goes Orpheus reached the end of the Underworld, up the final cliff and out of worry and the thought that she was right behind her, he looked back at her, but she had fallen behind and she was swept away by Mercury back into the Underworld and was lost absolutely from Orpheus.

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This is dedicated to a special someone, they know who they are. In my impatience and attempts to help I feel as though you will be lost to me, like Eurydice was to Orpheus, though I do them out of love.


Any comments and critiques are welcome.
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~TerrificTragedy Oct 3, 2011  Student Photographer
This is breathtaking!! I love the story of Orpheus & Eurydice, made me want to tear up when I first learned about it in my Mythology class. And i completely agree, it is the most tragic love story.
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~Lunos Mar 18, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
wow sam this is fantastic :) i mean it , not to sound like an english geek but the imagery and emotion is so vivid. i love it, and you didn't use rhyme which i like, great work :)
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Oooooo! But there is rhyme Tasha, just its subtle enough to only influence the rhythm more than the metre of the poem!

Snuck those rhyming words in past you ;)

Glad you liked it ^^
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I friggin' love it. The style is so elegant. ... And that is a fabulous tale. Ovid was pretty rad.
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Shucks. Am very flattered.

And yes, Ovid was very cool, and this story is one of my faves. ^^
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Very well written; I love this story and you presented quite nicely. Very pretty use of language.
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