I.
I wept between the bed-sheets
where we made love,
we made war,
though both were fair.
I wept between the bed-sheets,
but the first wave is parked close
between the monoliths that
raise the carport,
so time is short.
I reinforce my battlements,
build pylons of pillows
don vestments and scents
of war:
Of sugar and lace,
No armor, no mace
can unravel you
like I do.
How I unravel you.
II.
I lay between the bed-sheets
Under the weight of your body.
the price of war,
I lay stinking, soiled, sore
between these bed-sheets.
My lace is torn,
My sugar scent
now the brine that shines
on skin, on cheeks carmine,
Divine! Could you be mine?
I lay awake. I wonder:
Do you tell stories
of conquests and glories
upon our battlefield?
I guess itd be fair.
III.
I wait between the bed-sheets,
for the phone monotone alarm
before a light switch dawn.
My kingdom lies in ruins,
The underlay overturned
the pillows collapsed
into the doona, but, perhaps,
My worst:
The enemy sleeps in my camp.
I wish he was my hostage,
But I am the Prisoner
in my own lands.
Tomorrow, or today,
I will rebuild.
Tomorrow, or tonight
He will tear my walls down:
We will make war,
We will make love,
both are fair.














Devious Comments
Comments
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Yet each man kills the thing he loves
By each let this be heard,
Some do it with a bitter look,
Some with a flattering word,
The coward does it with a kiss,
The brave man with a sword!
-Oscar Wilde
I guess that's art for you.
Thank you for reading, and commenting
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'Journalism is just a Gun. It's only got one bullet in it, but if you aim it right it's all you need. Aim it right and you can blow a kneecap off the World.'
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To become the overman, you must first go under.
I was happy with the structure. At the moment it is based off intuition, but from my background where I used strict metre I find I cannot write without some form of struture and sense to my writing. I don't get random words without meaning either
(I'm also glad that I am not alone on that matter too!)
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'Journalism is just a Gun. It's only got one bullet in it, but if you aim it right it's all you need. Aim it right and you can blow a kneecap off the World.'
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To become the overman, you must first go under.
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It grieves me that this is not a dirigible,
that the sea stows us as a song in the belly of a maestro...
Oliver de la Paz
Thank you so very very much, that was a very nice thing I enjoyed hearing very very much!!
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'Journalism is just a Gun. It's only got one bullet in it, but if you aim it right it's all you need. Aim it right and you can blow a kneecap off the World.'
--
It grieves me that this is not a dirigible,
that the sea stows us as a song in the belly of a maestro...
Oliver de la Paz
I think the world would ph33r our alliance and compliments. We could control the world with oue iron fists of compliments!
(That or we'll just both have happy lives in mutual complimenting, though I'm sure the first theory is equally plausible!)
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'Journalism is just a Gun. It's only got one bullet in it, but if you aim it right it's all you need. Aim it right and you can blow a kneecap off the World.'
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