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There was a Moment

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They do not stretch towards the sky,
Have not grandeur to recommend them,
But modesty does dignify
And describe those markers for them.

While some are named, and others bare,
Through rows of crosses stretching on,
Anonymity does not impair
The sacrifice beneath each one.

There was a Cost.

The battlefields still flowing red
Not held in bootsteps in the mud,
Crimson poppies unfurl instead:
Colour of remembrance, passion, blood.

In that grave which held youth’s toil,
The earth hid the terrible stain,
Flowers sprung forth the tremb’ling soil,
With the lives it could ne’er contain.

There was a Rebirth.

The huddled masses look for dawn
With frosted breaths cresting their lips,
The haunting wail of a brass horn
Sings of unity and mateship.

And as they stood, some overwrought,
Praise, not shells, heard amid the throng,
And though they thought of those who fought,
They acknowledged all war is wrong.

There was a Moment.

There was a moment we said stop,
There was a cry to end it all.
There was a time the guns were dropped
And for Peace, united, we called.
[link] Peace Competition




I chose to write about War, because it is the greatest sin against life, and Peace itself. Yet, at the same time, it is the thought and the memory of the horrors of War and the capability to indiscriminately and senselessly take life that fills us with a sense of immediacy and the acute need for Peace itself. It fills us with the impetus to unite against it, and to mourn the greatest loss to all humankind of the most basic human right to live, as if it was our life itself lost.

I chose to keep my poem fairly simple in subject matter, style and language as well as make it easy to read. Peace is simple in its instinctive nature to us, and all I wanted my Poem to do is to remind you we are just as capable of extending our hand to our neighbour as we are of pointing a gun. Make love, not war!

If only the world could function on a single rule:

'That everyone has individual rights up until where their rights take away the rights of their neighbours.'

Something always gets lost in translation, don't you think?

Thanks, Sammi xoxo
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amalym's avatar
That poem is absolutly amazing you almost made me cry!!! I will be back to read your other work!!